Finally I finished the Poem I wrote for my brother

I wrote a poem for my bother who passed away.
and I posted it in the blogs where I posted all about him.
this is the link
http://pop19sabandon.blogspot.com/2011/04/he-was-our-ideal-man-he-was-our-baby.html#links

Writing a poem needs love and compassion,
to be able to put our thoughts into words.
It needs experiences of pain and happiness to be able to create ideas that will come from our hearts

I am not a professional writer but i really love to write,
I write any topics that would fit to my interest  about love,
career, God and my daily experiences.

I write all my ideas and just put the words that i easily understand.
I write and write what's in my thoughts, then
I edit the words, change some words that will make some rhythm
in the lines or stanzas of the poem.

Example from the 3rd stanza of the poem, I rhyme
the lines below;

We tried to seized his sorrows behind

and showed our smiles and smeared our tears behind.

Originally it is ;
We tried to take his sadness behind
and showed our smiles and hide our tears from him.

To put some rhyme I change the word take to seized and sadness to sorrows
and hide in the second line to smeared.


I want to use simple English so that everybody could easily comprehend .

After how many writings finally I can say that,
I have developed my skills into writing and
somehow was able to  make a nice piece.

Write and write....